I want to discuss about soccer first. People play soccer in a field. They play soccer in outdoor. The numbers of players in soccer are eleven. There are three substitutions during the match in playing soccer. If you get a red card, another player can not replace your position. Also, the times of playing soccer are 2x45 minutes. There are not time outs in soccer.
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I want to discuss about futsal second. People play futsal in a room. They play futsal in indoor. The numbers of players in futsal are five. There are unlimited substitutions during the match in playing futsal. If you get a red card, another player can replace your position. He has to wait for 2 minutes before he replace your position. Also, the times of playing futsal are 2x20 minutes. There is a time out per half in futsal.
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It is fun to play both of them. People often choose one of these two options to spend their free time. Actually, many boys and man choose futsal because it is hard to find a soccer field this day. Also, we can play futsal anytime. Sometimes, we can see children still play soccer in a small field every evening. Just choose what do you like to do in your free time.
I think your essay is good..
BalasHapusbut I think you can change some sentences into complex sentence so it become more interesting...
and just explore more about your idea..
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i think your essay is interesting. be carefully with grammar. keep writing and do your best guys :)
BalasHapusi think this big choose but this sport can make our body keep fit and improve our abilities to playig football
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Your essay is good enougt,..
BalasHapusI am interested about it,..
So far so good,..
Improve your writing again and again,..
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i think your essay is good..
BalasHapusbut you must add many information to make it better..
and don't forget for grammar check..
thank you :)
your essay is good,..
BalasHapusyou must revisit it again..
add more information about football and futsal..
keep spirit..
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BalasHapusthanks for your comment..
your essay is good.. you make me understand about differences between soccer and futsal.
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keep writing and improve again your grammar..
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Adnan,
BalasHapusI think your essay is good.
you're really crazy with football,ha?
But in paragraph 3 you write "I want to discuss about futsal second."
I think you change it with "Now,let's discuss about futsal."
That's all from me.
Tq. :)
I like playing futsal a lot!
BalasHapuswhen do we can play together again?
my foots are itchy for waiting that! haha :D