Koto Tuo is one of sub-districts in IV Koto. It is located in Agam, West Sumatera. It is near from Bukittinggi, one of interesting city in West Sumatera. It is about 20 minutes from Bukittinggi by car. If you go from Padang, the capital of West Sumatera, it is about 2 hours 30 minutes. It is located in mountain slope.
The weather is fresh and good in Koto Tuo. It is not like in Padang. In the morning, it is pretty cold. In the afternoon, it is hot, but it is not as hot as in Padang. At night, the weather is pretty cold. You need jacket and blanket for sleeping. If there is rainy, it is very cold.
Koto Tuo has beautiful landscape. We can see the Singgalang mount from Koto Tuo. There are many trees on there. So, it make the weather is cold. There are many rice fields too on there because many people working as a farmer. The house is seems like Rumah Gadang. It is built from the woods. The river is clean because it is from mountain.
Singgalang mount
(celoteh-senja.blogspot.com/2008/09/telaga-dewi-dan-telaga-kumbang.html)
There is a big mosque in Koto Tuo. People call it “Al-Mubarak”. It has a tower in front of the mosque. But, because of the earthquake, the tower has fallen down. If the holyday, many people pray in there because many visitor come to Koto Tuo from another place. They want to meet with their family on there.
So, Koto Tuo is a great hometown to visit. You will not feel hot like in Padang. You can see beautiful landscape. One of them is Singgalang mount. You can come to one of big mosque in Agam, Al-Mubarak mosque. So, do you want to visit Koto Tuo?
i think your essay is good enough...
BalasHapusbut you still hve mistakes in sentence structure and dictions..
so, i think you still need to revise it and still need improvement..
"it is hot, but it is not as hot as in Padang".(paragraph 2 line 2)
BalasHapusI think you can not put coma before conjunction "but".
"Singgalang mount"(paragraph 3 line 1)
I think the truth one in "Mount Singgalang".
at all, so far so good...
that is all from me...
please comment my blog too...
"the capital of West Sumatera"
BalasHapusI think it's good to you to add "city after capital.
I think it is a good essay but be careful in diction.
That's all from me,..
:)
I like your Essay ...
BalasHapusBecause you can tell more specifik about it ...
My advice is you should add more idea in your essay, It is better for your essay ...
Write more than 5 paragraph ...
i think your esaay is good..
BalasHapusyou just add more information about your hometown..
so.
keep writing to be better...^_^
please tell me about more tourism object in your hometown adnan,,
BalasHapusheheheh
and about your essay,, i think is better enough,,my suggestion is maybe you have to add more idea in your essay,,
that's all from me,,
:)
It would be better for you if in every start paragraphs to give the distance at the beginning of the paragraph.
BalasHapusI suggest it...
thank you...
adnan,
BalasHapusI think so far so good .
but,
you can explore many place in there .
OK,
I think that's all from me .
It's clear everybody :p